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Every time you take a step,
I'm stepping with you.
And every time you make a move,
I'm making that move too.
Every time you speak,
I'm hearing you.
And every time you hear a word,
I hear it too.
Every time you fake a smile,
I know it just like you.
And every time you break a bond,
I can feel it too.
Every time you leave,
I follow you.
And every time you cry,
My tears fall down too.
Every time you talk,
I speak as you.
And every thought you have,
I think it too.
Every time you laugh,
I laugh with you.
And every time you dream,
I dream it all too.
Every time you lie in your room,
I lie right there with you.
And every time you stand,
I stretch my legs too.
Every time you walk with your friends,
I walk right beside you.
And every time you try to escape,
I run away too.
Every time you sing a song,
I sing along with you.
And every time you go anywhere,
I'm heading to that place too.
Every time you write a word,
I move my pen with you.
And every time you turn away,
I turn my back too.
Every time you wish to die,
I won't let you.
And every time you remember them,
I hope you remember me too.
Every time you do anything,
I'm there with you.
And every time you’re in times of need,
I'm not just a friend, but your guardian angel too.
©2008-2009 ~kazumisangel
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Author's Comments

Another oldie, but this one is a goodie. :D
It's one of my happier poems, and I like it.
Inspired by the song, "Every Breath You Take" by The Police.
This one was interesting to write, I tried to keep the same pattern, so every four lines start, "Every,I (finish with 'you';), And every, I (finish with 'too';)"
Hope you liked it!

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:iconoctoberazriel:
Nice, and has a great rhythm to it.:)

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"Here's our only conversation we've ever had without using our words to show. And our love is a creation of all the things that
have ever had a chance to grow."

Charades - Stephen Jerzak
:iconkazumisangel:
Thanks. I love reading and writing things in rhythm, it always makes if flow better in my head. :D

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"It's four o'clock in the morning, damn it, listen to me good...You're a butterfly, and butterflies are free to fly. Fly away, high away, bye bye."

~Elton John "Someone Saved My Life Tonight"
:iconoctoberazriel:
Works wonderfully well. (ooh, nicey I used consonance/alliteration.)

--
"Here's our only conversation we've ever had without using our words to show. And our love is a creation of all the things that
have ever had a chance to grow."

Charades - Stephen Jerzak
:iconkazumisangel:
:XD: I did a poetry unit in fifth grade, and we had to do ten sentences with alliteration...they were pretty weird sentences...

--
"It's four o'clock in the morning, damn it, listen to me good...You're a butterfly, and butterflies are free to fly. Fly away, high away, bye bye."

~Elton John "Someone Saved My Life Tonight"
:iconoctoberazriel:
Sounds fun.:)

--
"Here's our only conversation we've ever had without using our words to show. And our love is a creation of all the things that
have ever had a chance to grow."

Charades - Stephen Jerzak
:iconkazumisangel:
Yeah, I think I still have it saved somewhere...
Don't do what Daddy-Long-Legs did to dear Dad.
Eleven eyeballs eyed eighty electric eels.
Manny made Molly march many miles over muddy mountains.
Twelve toads are taller than thirteen tiny tomcats.
Crazy Caroline cried, "Can't I keep Cassis the cat?"
Awesome Aileen asked Andy to ask awesome Adam any answer.
Scary Susie sent shy Sophie somewhere south of Spain on Saturday.
The unlucky underdog underlined upsidedown underwater umbrella birds.
Woody Woodchuck wasn't Woody Woodpecker like the wild wolves thought.
And, my personal favorite:
Lucky Lizzie licks lemon lollipops. Likewise, lasers leave llamas alone.

--
"It's four o'clock in the morning, damn it, listen to me good...You're a butterfly, and butterflies are free to fly. Fly away, high away, bye bye."

~Elton John "Someone Saved My Life Tonight"
:iconoctoberazriel:
Wow, thats a lot.

--
"Here's our only conversation we've ever had without using our words to show. And our love is a creation of all the things that
have ever had a chance to grow."

Charades - Stephen Jerzak
:iconkazumisangel:
Yup, and all just about the weirdest things I've ever written...

--
"It's four o'clock in the morning, damn it, listen to me good...You're a butterfly, and butterflies are free to fly. Fly away, high away, bye bye."

~Elton John "Someone Saved My Life Tonight"
:iconoctoberazriel:
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"Here's our only conversation we've ever had without using our words to show. And our love is a creation of all the things that
have ever had a chance to grow."

Charades - Stephen Jerzak

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